Feedback on initial idea

I presented my ideas pitch to my media class and received feedback to help me improve my ideas and meets the needs of my audience.

Things people liked:

• The video will appeal to most genders rather than being based around male perception. 
• The song choice (The Hop - A Tribe Called Quest)
• The 90s theme
• There will be a representation of youth and different cultures
• No story-line because it's a performance video

Improvements and ideas:

• Planning needs consideration
• Research in depth potential locations
• Use a high quality camera - even if low quality would fit the theme
• Make sure the audience is kept interested throughout the performing